Sunday, August 21, 2011

Sneak peak SS

Heres a sneak peak at my one of my short stories. I hope you enjoy it. If you would like to finish the tale simply let me know.

By Davey Garay
Harriet and the Kiss of Forgetfulness

Harriet was a very beautiful young woman,More beautiful than most women.She was full of life and a certain gracefulness that attracted men and women alike as if moths to the flame. Harriet was a flame and she burned very brightly.Despite her happiness, her life had been hard. At a young age her mother’s life had perished but not before her mother could make a wish and write it on a slip of paper.

She gave the slip to Harriet and said “This now has my heart little baby. Keep it with you always and may you forget me as a sorrowful memory but remember as I once was. Only look at this slip when you need. When the time comes you will know.” And with this final statement her breathe escaped her body, fading in to the sunlight peeking through the window.

Harriet was still such a loving and beautiful little girl, full of magic and wonder. She was always out dancing amidst the sadness of the world; as if to say “What sadness?”

Harriet’s father walked out on her some time after this tragedy. Many nights he would watch his daughter sleep with caring and loving eyes. She was all that he had left and Harriet felt safe when he was near...

That's it. That's all you get.
(P.S. the story is finished, just in case you were wondering)

1 comment:

TrueBeautyLiesInside♥ said...

♥Davey. You have an amazing talent. This story, although it is just a sneak peak, is absolutely amazing. Please, don't ever leave. You help me through all of my tough times, more than anyone ever has. You've been through situations worse than mine, so you have acquired the knowledge that I seak to find. Davey, I know that you don't believe me when I say this, but I care greatly about you, & hope to see you again soon. I wish that... nevermind. Anyways. Amazing story.
♥-Sarah.